our group are Curtis Tolan, Hua Gong, Dhurgham Al Saffar

Evaluate strengths and weaknesses of the essay with the following:

For Curtis Tolan:
Essay’s link: http://curtten191f12s27.blogspot.com/

1.   Organization/structure

9 of 10 because there is no indents.

2.   Supporting arguments

10 of 10

3.   Flow

10 of 10

4.   Grammar

9 of 10 because I found “apart” instead of a part in the benefits’ paragraph.

5.   Source use

10 of 10

 For Hua Gong

Essay’s link: http://huagongs.blogspot.com/

1.   Organization/structure

10 of 10

2.   Supporting arguments

5 of 10 because it is too short and no enough examples.

3.   Flow

10 of 10

4.   Grammar

10 of 10

5.   Source use

10 of 10